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Daniel Tobin: The Lens
Into the wreck an available light
reigns down, more mist than glitter,
a soft day’s mediation of air and earth
framed inside this photograph’s bright-limned
severance of the moment from its moment.
It might be the finest glaze of wax melting
the way the sky’s ablution has nestled in the hold
to make the engines, long dead, look painterly.
Their green is the green of cathedral frescos
when the smoke of prayer candles hazes
them with ash. And here, too, is a candle’s
chiaroscuro, hung with necessary blackness
above the floor-soldered pistons and drums,
that metal stanchion like a toppled column
frozen mid-fall. Is it this gorgeously stilled
ochre wash of rust that seems to fill the hull’s
sheer chamber with the leaf-blood of infinite
autumns, or the water-charred walls braced
against the limestone ledge where the sea
cast up the bulk? Either way, it is you I see
lowering your body to measure the scene,
your hair long, the sheen on a crow’s wing,
cropped now and silver like the limestone, foam
and samphire at your feet, and in your hand the lens.
Copyright 2023 Daniel Tobin
Daniel Tobin‘s many books include Blood Labors (Four Way Books, 2018). He teaches at Emerson College in Boston.
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Ah the exacting, difficult and challenging art of description: well done, friend!
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Also a nod to Adriene Rich.
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Yes, although the two poems have very different voices, don’t you think?
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Yes, Tobin’s poem isn’t nearly as abstracted or politically urgent as Rich’s poem–there is no transformation of the voice in Tobin’s poem whereas Rich’s diver undergoes a metamorphisis.
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Stunning, mysterious.
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Isn’t it, though?
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I think so too, Edison.
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Love this.
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Tautly braided and fine, like a nylon whip-popper without which the body only “cracks” dully no matter the holding hand.
Very fine indeed.
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Well-said, Sean..
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